Friday, September 20, 2013

Repartee

Again deviating from routine, here's a very interesting counter strike to the poem in the previous post, by the one and only Maloo ;)

She strikes once in a blue moon, but when she does, it's giggles and smiles all the way! :D

Without much ado, let me post here her composition..

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Itna accha likhkar
Kehte ho situational composition,
Kalam tumhari chalti rahi
Bina kissi preassure ke aur naahi koi tension.

Bill hi bharwana tha
Toh leleti card number,
Kya zaroorat thi usse dene ki
Aapne winter, rains and summer.

Akele hi gunguna leti
Kuch lafz kuch jazbaat,
Ab teri hi hogayi hai
Dono shey aur maat.

Tasveer khudhi ki dekhti
Naa deti aaina chupa,
Kyun aur ek ko tune

Aapne pyaar mein liya fasa..!

© Maloo

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