Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Random Thoughts...


As i climb up the stairs, i think..

What is it that needs elevation..

My aims, or my efforts?

And as i take a turn on a floor

I ponder..

Is this the time to rest,

or realise that i need to move up further..

without stopping...

As soon as i reach the terrace..

I feel the sunshine,

which takes me out of the halogen illuminations..

I wonder..is this virtual or real?

i think about my destination.

I HAVE come to the right place...

But the ultimate refuses to reveal itself..

And then i know, i have another set

of staircases..... invisible...

that will make me compete with myself

make me reach to a destination

which has been pushed a few light years away....

And then i realise...

the goals elevate themselves..

I need to escalate my efforts...

I am climbing up the stairs.. and i am thinking...
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  1. skhajoneFebruary 19, 2009 at 9:35 AM

    :)
    Not random at all.... very directed thoughts. The search for the goal. All of us......

    Elegant way to put the simple thoughts. :)

    Keep it up

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  2. nashaFebruary 19, 2009 at 11:17 AM

    u organize and portray ur thoughts very well :)

    v nice

    now am thinking... :)

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  3. SudipFebruary 20, 2009 at 5:37 PM

    Very nice :)

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  4. Abhishek JoshiFebruary 21, 2009 at 4:10 PM

    Baap re baap! Are you on crack?! If ur not, then kudos! Amazing poetry... :)

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  5. Obscure OptimistFebruary 23, 2009 at 9:29 AM

    @sunny,nasha,Sudip,A.j: Thank you :)

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  6. Aniket ThakkarFebruary 23, 2009 at 8:10 PM

    All this time I was searching for answers for I had too many unanswered questions in life... Lately I have realized that I need to redefine the questions themseleves!

    Nicely done as always!

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  7. Amritorupa Kanjilal February 26, 2009 at 12:42 PM

    very lovely verse Yamini. my first visit to your blog and i loved it completely. you write beautifully...

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  8. p!qFebruary 27, 2009 at 11:28 AM

    You should be addressed as denizen of the planet called "food for thought".

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  9. Obscure OptimistFebruary 27, 2009 at 12:42 PM

    @aniket: Lot of things make sense after retrospection and introspection. This verse was just a result of that.Thanks fo yourr comment :)

    @Little Girl Lost: Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it.

    @p!g: Woah.. Thank ya :)

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  10. ladduMarch 4, 2009 at 12:35 PM

    And then i realise...
    the goals elevate themselves..
    I need to escalate my efforts...
    I am climbing up the stairs.. and i am thinking...

    so true....very well written....:):)

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  11. AnonymousMarch 4, 2009 at 9:21 PM

    Well written...

    And we falter when when we try to take the express elavator...and then the electricity goes off..bad one :)

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