Refilling soul with life
Or refilling life with soul
I waited back to think and ponder
A thing I could surely control
Reliving life in those moments
Or reliving moments with life
It’s up to me to decide and do
Things which are hard to define
Reopening dreams to new vistas
Or reopening new vistas to dreams
Idle I sit and imagine
How do I reach that extreme?
A refreshing wine with memories
Or Refreshing memories with old wine
Indeed a thing to let go
When I don’t know which memories are mine
Refreshing, Refilling, Reliving
I kindle the desires and wait
For all the secrets to unfold
And explain the underlying trait…
I wait, I wait, I wait…..
Or refilling life with soul
I waited back to think and ponder
A thing I could surely control
Reliving life in those moments
Or reliving moments with life
It’s up to me to decide and do
Things which are hard to define
Reopening dreams to new vistas
Or reopening new vistas to dreams
Idle I sit and imagine
How do I reach that extreme?
A refreshing wine with memories
Or Refreshing memories with old wine
Indeed a thing to let go
When I don’t know which memories are mine
Refreshing, Refilling, Reliving
I kindle the desires and wait
For all the secrets to unfold
And explain the underlying trait…
I wait, I wait, I wait…..
Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThe first two lines of the first 3 paragraphs. WWWWWWWOWWWWW ......
ReplyDeleteTOOOOOOOO goood :)
Glad you are out of job :P . Well there is something good in everything it seems.
Keep it up :)
PS - please dont take it to heart.
You say best.... when you say it in poetic style! :D
ReplyDeleteOut n out Loved it. Extremely artisitic!
I concur with Aniket!
ReplyDeleteExquisite piece!
@ Sudip: Thank you!
ReplyDelete@Sunny: I don't take any of your comments to heart...and you know that... I truly believe that everything happens for good... and i am happy i am able to give time to my writing! :)
@Aniket: Thaks a ton. Glad you liked it :)
@Jinu: Thanks for dropping in...haven't seen much of you on my blog ;)!! and ofcourse thanx for appreciating! :)
I wait, I wait, I wait…
ReplyDeletedere r certain phases in our life wen v can do nothing but wait....
m going thru a similar one dese days....
gud one....as usual....:):)
Hmmmm..thoughtful attempt...
ReplyDeleteI must say i liked the 2 lines of each stanza...they had lot of sense...
good one yamini....
Keep posting..:)
please visit mine sometime... :P
ReplyDeleteP.S:You are blog rolled..:P
@anon: am glad you could relate with it!
ReplyDelete@Mahesh: Thanks a ton :)
hey yam.... u write beautiful re!!! know what when i read ur poems i feel ur poetry is better.... when i read ur stories i feel ur stories are better :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much for the comment, harshad :) this was one of the finest appreciations i've ever received! :)
ReplyDeleteExcellently penned.
ReplyDeleteGlad Iam here. As Sunny has mentioned above, the play of words at the beginning of the first four paras is awesome.
Keep them coming.
Cheers,
salil
Your post is the reflection of the reality:-)
ReplyDelete@salil: Thank you. I am glad you liked it :)
ReplyDelete@Hannah: rightly said... the poem is indeed the reflection of reality. Thanks for dropping in :)
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