Serial Fiction is back- After a long time.
Rishi and Anuj are best buds. Kim makes the bond stronger by making things brighter in their lives... Pleasant incidences from the lives of Kim, Rishi and Anuj...
Chapter 1. Champ-ag(ai)n-e
Chapter 2. Dreams
Chapter 3: Emergence of Events
Chapter 4: Fun Employed
Chapter 5: Golden Dusk
Chapter 6 : Heart to Heart
Chapter 7: Inferences
Chapter 8: J for Joy
Rishi and Anuj are best buds. Kim makes the bond stronger by making things brighter in their lives... Pleasant incidences from the lives of Kim, Rishi and Anuj...
Chapter 1. Champ-ag(ai)n-e
Chapter 2. Dreams
Chapter 3: Emergence of Events
Chapter 4: Fun Employed
Chapter 5: Golden Dusk
Chapter 6 : Heart to Heart
Chapter 7: Inferences
Chapter 8: J for Joy
Glued i am :)
ReplyDeleteCrazy affair it is!
ReplyDeleteJust cant wait to see whats next?
Post Post...
Hmm
ReplyDeleteCant say anything, beyond my minute comprehension skills…..
Just wish if I can also write like you!!!
By the way dreams are really a good point to write on!!!
Awesome yamini mazzza aa gaya….
ReplyDeleteThis Part
“She looked around -with pride and glee.
All of a sudden she felt something cold, chilly, on her bare arms.
"Ouch", she reacted, and turned back.
"ANUJ.....", she hugged him. After a long hug she began "and what WAS that?", she asked.
Anuj showed her a bottle.
"ppaparapaparapajoujoujou", Rishi emerged.”
Was supendofantaboluslyfantastical
Criticism,, though I sincerely feel that m not capable of that but still will give it a shot…
ReplyDeletea) A strong reason for rishi to come back from Melbourne sooner than 2 months could have been nice….
b) In chapter 2 Dreams, Anuj says I want to get back to US and earn some more.. so thoda Anuj desc ho sakta tha, as in what he actually does…
c) All three stare a lot at the oblivion,,,
Although part of me thinks that that’s the common thing of their personalities and it adds up making them best buds but part of me thinks too much oblivion ho gaya… so m not sure :P :P
@Sunny: Thanks for staying glued, if you were, at all, until the end!
ReplyDelete@Varu: So? how was it?
@Soumo: Thanks a ton. Am honoured to have an awesome reader like you!!
@Saha: Thanks a ton for all pointing out the points missing in this serial. It'll help me to be more concise and precise the next time :)
Yo Yamini, Interesting !! You are good at writing fiction.. waiting for the next series :-)
ReplyDeleteI think I would like to change the names of the characters ( real names u see) .. I have sent you a message.. you will know why once you read the names. :-)
@Anu: Awesome!! Am glad everyone finds a relevance to someone or the other.. You are pretty close :)
ReplyDeleteAnd for readers like you.. I'll come back with a fiction soon :)